Exploring Where I'm From

• Students will read and analyse a poem in order to identify social and cultural factors that help shape our identities.
• Students will identify social and cultural factors that help shape their identities by creating their own personal identity charts and writing poems that reflect their identities.

Each lesson in this scheme of work includes a PowerPoint of student-facing slides. The PowerPoints are intended to be used alongside, and not instead of, the lesson plans because the latter include important rationales and context that teachers should familiarise themselves with before teaching each lesson.

The PowerPoints include basic content and student-facing prompts from the lesson plans but are minimally designed because we expect teachers to adapt them to fit the needs of their students and class.

• Explain to students that they will be thinking about what factors make up their identities and reading a poem about identity.
• Project the following questions and have students choose one or more to explore in a journal reflection:

  • How much of who you are is determined at your birth? 
  • How much of your identity do you decide? 
  • What aspects of your identity, if any, are determined by others?

• Give students an opportunity to share any ideas that they feel comfortable sharing in small groups or using the Think, Pair, Share strategy.
• Explain to students that a range of different factors influence our identities. Then as a class, brainstorm these various factors, writing the suggestions on the board. Ask students to record this list in their books to refer to when they are making their own identity charts. If necessary, choose from the following factors to generate ideas:

  • Religious/spiritual affiliation
  • Culture, race, or ethnicity
  • Appearance/style
  • Language or nationality
  • Hobbies/interests
  • Gender
  • Sexual orientation
  • Beliefs and values
  • Group/organisation/community membership
  • Personality traits
  • Place
  • Socio-economic class
  • Work

• Pass out and read aloud ‘Where I’m From’. Try reading it a few different ways. Perhaps you read it out loud the first time so that students get a sense of the rhythm of the poem. Then, using popcorn or wraparound, which are explained in the Read Aloud teaching strategy, have students read the poem out loud sentence by sentence and/or line by line.
• After reading the poem, ask the students to choose 1–3 lines that resonate with them for one of the following reasons and to explore this in writing in their journals:

  • Because of something about who I am (What in particular?)
  • Because it reflects human nature or how people are in the world (What human characteristics or ways of being in the world?)
  • Because of how the poet expressed the idea (What did the poet do that stood out to you? How did it make you feel?) ¹

• Give students an opportunity to share any ideas that they feel comfortable sharing in groups or using the Think, Pair, Share strategy.
• Next, divide the students into small groups and project the following questions for them to discuss. If necessary, before the discussion refresh your students’ knowledge of literary devices by having them complete the Literary Devices Definition Match handout.
  • List five things that we learn about Melanie Poonai and her family in the poem. 
  • What do you think Poonai means when she uses the phrase ‘a life filled with colour’? What might this phrase suggest about who she is and her experiences?
  • Where in the poem does Poonai use anaphora? What is the effect of this repetition?  
  • What features of her identity has Poonai chosen for herself? Which ones have been determined by others or external factors?
  • Why do you think Poonai wrote the poem? What message does she want to send?
• As a class, complete an identity chart for Melanie Poonai on the board using ideas from the poem. 
• If time allows, ask students to select the line or device that they think is the most powerful in the poem (this could be the most emotionally powerful or the one that sends the clearest message). Give students the chance to share their lines in a wraparound.

• 1David Perkins, Future Wise: Educating Our Children for a Changing World (San Francisco: Jossey-Bass, 2014), 126.

• Explain to students that they will be continuing their reflection on identity and will have the opportunity to write their own poem in the same style as Melanie Poonai.
• To help them to generate ideas for their poems, project the following 3-2-1 prompt for students to complete independently in their journals:
  • 3 adjectives to describe your family
  • 2 similes to describe your home and/or cultural heritage
  • 1 metaphor to describe how you do or don’t view yourself
• Explain to students that they will now be completing their own identity charts in their books (or using the Starburst Identity Chart handout). Encourage them to think about both the way they view themselves (signalling this with arrows pointing away from their name) and how others might view them (signalling this with arrows pointing towards their name).
• To help them complete their chart, they can use their previous journal entry, the identity factors they brainstormed on the board in Part I of the lesson, and the ideas from Melanie Poonai’s poem ‘Where I’m From’ . You can also project the sample identity chart or create your own on the board. Completing your own version is an effective way to model risk-taking and can help students feel more comfortable about sharing their identity charts with their classmates.  
• After students have spent at least three minutes completing their identity charts, encourage them to share the elements of their identity charts that they feel comfortable sharing with a partner. They do not need to show their partners their charts; they can keep it hidden and talk about it. One student should share their chart for two minutes, whilst the other student actively listens, and then they should switch around.

• Tell students that for the next activity, they will be working individually to create their own identity poems in the ‘Where I’m From’ style. 
• Pass out the handout Where I’m From Brainstorm, and ask students to complete it independently, giving them seven minutes to do so. Explain that the goal of this brainstorming exercise is to generate ideas for writing their poems.
• Then have students share their brainstorms with another student. Encourage students to pose questions that will help their partners generate new ideas to add to their brainstorm handout.
• Explain to students that they will now have time to begin drafting their identity poems using the same structure as Poonai (give them ten to fifteen minutes). Encourage them to use a range of literary devices, using both Poonai’s poem and the Literary Devices Definition Match handout to help them. Alternatively, you can give students a list of specific devices to use, writing them on the board as success criteria. 
• If students do not have time to complete their poems in class, you may ask them to complete them at home.

Next, give students the chance to Think, Pair, Share in response to the following questions before leading a short class discussion:

• What has reading and writing poems taught you about your own identity?
• Which parts of your identity do you choose for yourself?
• Which parts are chosen by society? 
• To what degree are we all a product of our environment?